I think this has been said in other reviews, but it needs to be said again. What was up with all the metaphors and descriptions? It took away from the reading flow, not enhanced it like I think it was meant to.
THIS I didn't know what was going on. Why didn't she just leave that out, then it dawned on me, oh we're reading from her journal? No wait, we're not. That's her thoughts? I think so.
Last complaint: The way the book just ended. I don't like when an author basically takes a whole story and divides it into three books. That's cheating to me. I can see if we wrapped up a section of the story and then there was more, but this ending just felt like. "Oh I'm tired for the day let's just leave it there and when I'm done napping maybe I'll write more."
Ok so with my complaints done, here's the good:
this is like Heroes! So way cool on my list! = )
Adam is Hot, another star, and Kenji is also Hot & funny, another star.